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The Fifth Element: Fanfic: Inside

  • Sep. 16th, 2012 at 10:50 PM
Title: Inside
Fandom: The Fifth Element
Rating: G
Length: 100
Content notes: None.
Author notes: For [community profile] fan_flashworks Challenge #23, "Secrets". Second work for the challenge. Working on several achievement badges this time 'round. XD
Summary: The burden she carries inside her



She is glad for the veil as she boards the ship. So many curious eyes, so many wondering faces. The trip to her quarters is fast, but even so, it worries her. The burden she carries inside her, as willing as she was to take it on, is heavy. Heavy inside her body and heavy on her mind. It is crucial, this task, and it will be her most important role. These four unassuming stones are all that can save the universe. She rests her hand over her stomach beneath her cloak. Four stones and one girl. One perfect being.

Comments

hazelwho: (headstones hugh look)
[personal profile] hazelwho wrote:
Sep. 17th, 2012 03:46 am (UTC)
Nice snippet!! I always loved the Diva, and she does so much with her screen time. I wish we knew more of her story. =)
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Sep. 17th, 2012 03:57 am (UTC)
Thank you! I'm very curious about the Diva's backstory, too. She's such an enigma.
hazelwho: a clock with 13 hours from the movie Labyrinth (laby clock 13)
[personal profile] hazelwho wrote:
Sep. 17th, 2012 04:04 am (UTC)
Yeah. They've placed so much trust in her, and her dedication in incredible. I really liked that you hit on the heaviness of her burden and - her awe at being chosen to take it on - in your snippet.
exbex: (Default)
[personal profile] exbex wrote:
Sep. 18th, 2012 02:48 am (UTC)
Lovely. You've captured the dignity and the mystery of the character. <3
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Sep. 18th, 2012 02:55 am (UTC)
XD Thank you!
cirque: (grin)
[personal profile] cirque wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2012 04:08 am (UTC)
I love this. The Diva always fascinated me, I always wished this movie had spawned a prequel of some kind so we could see more of this world.
musyc: Silver flute resting diagonally across sheet music (Default)
[personal profile] musyc wrote:
Sep. 23rd, 2012 04:33 am (UTC)
Thank you!

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