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Title : Death is No Barrier to Miscommunication
Fandoms : due South, Hard Core Logo
Characters : Benton Fraser, Ray Kowalski, Billy Tallent, Robert Fraser
Rating : Mature Audiences
Warning : Author chooses to limit warnings to avoid spoilers; there's violence, but it's not graphic.
Word Count : 255

Author Notes : Written for the fan_flashworks "Communication" Challenge.

Summary : There's communication from the dying...and communication from the dead.



You ran toward the sound of an altercation in the alley, you and Ray both ran. You thought you had outdistanced Ray...but there in the alley -- oh God no -- there Ray sprawled, a knife in his chest, and his assailant running away. You had gone to your knees next to the lanky stilling form, crying out "Ray! Ray! RAY!"...trying to call him back from crossing over to death.

Then Ray came running up, yelling "Fraser!" -- and you thought the last one of your marbles must have escaped that hole in their bag -- but when Ray stopped there, shocked, and then exclaimed "Holy shit!" you knew by his tone that he too was seeing the same blonde dying man you were seeing, the one who looked exactly like Ray. Of course, THEN it registered on you : the difference in attire and no silver bracelet, the mingled scents of nicotine and alcohol.

Dying, Billy Tallent had looked at you, the last face he would see from this side of the Borderlands; he thought you were unearthly beautiful and he thought the word you had cried out was "Pray! Pray! PRAY!" He thought you were not a man, but an angel. His last words before death were "Angel...never expected an angel...not for what I've done...you're so fuckin' beautiful...."

As you stood and turned toward Ray, there appeared your father's apparition with one of his oft-unhelpful remarks : "Death is no barrier to miscommunication, Son." You sigh in response. How well you already knew that.

Comments

[identity profile] bghost.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 08:59 pm (UTC)
This is really good... and I have no idea who Billy Tallent is! But I love him mistaking Fraser for an angel, and the fact that he hears what he needs to at the end. And the resignation at the end, 'how well you already new that.' Says a lot about Bob and Fraser's relationship!

In fact, such a lot in so few words. Really good.

And now I want to know what Billy Tallent did, that Fraser's appearance seemed to be a redemption for him.

I'm intrigued!
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 09:47 pm (UTC)
TYK for reading and for your comments, ESPECIALLY for your comments that tell me you got a lot out of the fic even WITHOUT knowing about Billy Tallent and Hard Core Logo. For a quick look at HCL and for some pics of Billy Tallent, I rec the awesome "Hard Core Logo Story" by exeterlinden at http://exeterlinden.livejournal.com/22910.html

(Of course, you could also watch the HCL movie...but " lots of warnings apply".)
desireearmfeldt: (cloak)
[personal profile] desireearmfeldt wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 09:06 pm (UTC)
Hee hee -- what a great Bob Fraser line. :)
[identity profile] clevermanka.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 09:09 pm (UTC)
I agree. I had a moment of "Did he actually say that at some point during the series?" It's perfect.
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 09:53 pm (UTC)
Wow, what a great compliment! Having you wonder "was that canon"? (No, it wasn't...but I could hear Bob saying it...and "I write what the voices tell me to write".)
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 09:49 pm (UTC)
Glad you thought so! Sometimes, when I'm writing fic, it's like Bob's ghost voice "follows me to the ends of the earth"! XD
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/demon_bride_/ wrote:
May. 10th, 2012 10:36 pm (UTC)
Oh my... Having Billy Talent die is already tragic, but Fraser's momentary panic and Bob's ever helpful remark make it even more so. I think the misunderstanding about the "pray" is a great touch - a sudden hope for Billy. Very nice, especially the implications for Fraser. Maybe there really is something angelic about him
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 08:32 am (UTC)
Yes, there really IS something angelic about him, in an "angel unawares" way...and I plan to develop that further.
[identity profile] bghost.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 04:30 pm (UTC)
Ooh, that I am looking forward to. Angels, of course, are messengers. One could argue that Fraser lives his message, refuses to drown in the garbage of the world.

Of course he's also, as Billy says, 'so fuckin beautiful.'
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 10:16 am (UTC)
Oh yes, I do have the plotbunny for developing a relationship between dead!Billy and angelic!Fraser.
[identity profile] bghost.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 10:21 am (UTC)
Oh Lord, you've just twisted an idea I had in my Big Bang fic, and now I'm worried I've got an angelic Fraser too... in a different guise, of course.

Argh... you twisted evil genius. Love your new pic by the way.
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 10:28 am (UTC)
*does twisted evil genius happy dance*

Ah. My new userpic, got it just a few hours ago from the gracious and talented isis...specifically because I'm looking forward to doing more angelic!Fraser. (Hmmm...doing Fraser...did I just say that, or do I have a head injury?)
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/demon_bride_/ wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 09:51 am (UTC)
Interesting, definitely a great idea. So in the way of a wing!fic or less conspicuous? It's terribly cheesy, but your 'angel unawares' kind of conjured up the movie "City of Angels" XD It's really too early for such sappy thoughts ;)
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 10:20 am (UTC)
I'm thinking in the less conspicuous way, not the wing!fic way.

(However, I did promise vicki that I would write a wing!fic for her some time, with RayK the winged one.)
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/demon_bride_/ wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 11:51 am (UTC)
Oh. I'd love that as well. Somehow I prefer Ray as the winged one ;) I guess because it seems more natural for Fraser to have wings (what with him never getting dirty and always escaping unscathed) which is why I prefer Ray to have them. A kind of anti-angel if ever there was one :)
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 11:58 am (UTC)
Shall we share recs on some of those favorite angel!Ray fics?
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/demon_bride_/ wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 12:46 pm (UTC)
Gee, I'd love to... just that I don't think I bookmarked any *crestfallen* I never went for the wing!fic story until someone searched for recs of that kind on ds_ficfinders. And I read those recs, but never got around to saving them. Which, yeah, uhm...
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (Dead!Bob by revolution25)
[identity profile] akite.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 12:56 am (UTC)
*kicks Dead!Bob* How typically helpful that comment was... NOT!
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 08:35 am (UTC)
LOL at your icon!

And haven't you ever heard the saying "no use kicking a dead Mountie"? XD
[identity profile] exbex.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 02:26 am (UTC)
I love clever crossovers :DDD
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 08:41 am (UTC)
*does happy dance of crossover appreciation*
luzula: a Luzula pilosa, or hairy wood-rush (Default)
[personal profile] luzula wrote:
May. 11th, 2012 08:46 pm (UTC)
"Death is no barrier to miscommunication, Son."

Yes, that is a good Bob Fraser line!
[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com wrote:
May. 12th, 2012 10:23 am (UTC)
Makes me very happy, your response to my Bob Fraser line, since I consider you to be something of a Bob Fraser aficionado.

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