http://mander3-swish.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] mander3-swish.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] fan_flashworks2012-06-10 03:49 pm

Queer as Folk (US): FanFic: There's a Prize In Every Box

Author: [livejournal.com profile] mander3_swish
Title: There's a Prize In Every Box
Fandom/Characters: QaF(US): Brian/Justin
Word Count: 346
Rating: NC17
Summary post-513 set at Britin. Blowjobs are all fun and games until they're not. This is funny...I hope! Mostly just ridiculous. Justin's POV

It was a gorgeous spring day out and I just couldn't resist a morning run through the woods that are scattered about the property. The lilacs were in full bloom and the scent in the air was to die for.

Returning the house, I head up to have a shower, making sure to turn the coffee pot on first.

Brian follows me into the shower, asking, "Did you have anything to eat yet, or were you waiting for a nourishing, high protein breakfast that only I can provide?"

God, he's such dork sometimes - fucking sexy - but still a dork. "Oh you know I don't have any problems finding guys to blow. But you're looking kinda skinny... maybe it's your turn," I tease.

He didn't take much convincing, dropping to his knees after kissing me hard for couple minutes. It felt so good when he wrapped his hand and his mouth around my rapidly hardening cock. My hips began to buck involuntarily when his tongue slid along the underside of my cock. He placed a hand on my hip to steady me.

Right when it was getting good (who am I kidding, it's always good), Brian stopped abruptly. "What the fuck, Brian?" I ask, staring down at him. He's just staring at my pubes like he'd seen a ghost. "What?"

"Justin, what the fuck is that? That was definitely not there last night." Brian was now pointing AND staring at my pubes.

I look down and see what appears to be a mole...that's moving, but it's not. "Oh fuck, Brian, it's just a little woodtick," I say, grabbing it as I step out of the shower. "Nothing to be so freaked out about." I rip its head off with my fingernails and toss in the garbage can.

I get back in the shower, but it appears that mood is gone. We just end up washing each other, Brian spending extra time checking me everywhere for anymore pesky critters.

[identity profile] ride-4ever.livejournal.com 2012-06-10 11:32 pm (UTC)(link)
This line : "'Did you have anything to eat yet, or were you waiting for a nourishing, high protein breakfast that only I can provide?'" Oh boys! *g*

Edited 2012-06-10 23:32 (UTC)

[identity profile] guavejuice.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 06:32 am (UTC)(link)
Now that's one hilarious shower scene mander! ( and a nice treat from my break at work . Mind you I'm reading this while I'm sitting at the teachers stuff room heee)

[identity profile] soulmatejunkee.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 09:23 am (UTC)(link)
Poor boy didn't get off *LOL*

[identity profile] lindtti.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 06:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, that is definitely a mood killer!

*LOL* ♥

[identity profile] rulisteningbj.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Funny yet kind of gross. I am afraid Brian will never blow Justin again because he is so traumatized

Dee Dee

[identity profile] lazy-8s.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 08:01 pm (UTC)(link)

Now, that is hilarious, but, in truth, one of the drawback to country living. Loved this little shot of reality in the Britin world. :)

[identity profile] galehot.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 08:45 pm (UTC)(link)
I can imagine the 'hot moment is gone' at this scene!!

[identity profile] bksbracelet.livejournal.com 2012-06-20 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
lol oh dear a pesky little creature has the power to stop Brian in his persuit of happiness

[identity profile] sapphire-3.livejournal.com 2012-06-21 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
LOL! I saw the title of this and just had to check it out :-) Oh Brian, leaning about local wildlife. I'm not surprised you (and Justin) how to deal with wood ticks ;-) I have to admit that a 'tick check' was an ideal lead-in for a ficlet! Great job - love it!

[identity profile] ariadne-mitos.livejournal.com 2012-06-21 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
I wonder, where exactly was he looking for the critters???
That was funny, thanks hon!